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Post  Lord*Jani on Tue Oct 18, 2011 4:18 am

There are those who believe that life here began out there, far
across the universe, with tribes of humans who may have been the
forefathers of the Egyptians, or the Toltecs, or the Mayans.
That they may have been the architects of the great pyramids, or
the lost civilizations of Lemuria or Atlantis.

Some believe that there may yet be brothers of man who even now
fight to survive, somewhere beyond the heavens. . .



"Sir, PrivateFirst Class COCCO reports his squadron is ready,"
called out a crewman from the pit to Brigade general jani as he made
his way to the top of the command podium.
"Status, Georgel," ordered Jani as he confronted his second in
command.
"Scanners show a Cylon basestar closing in. Her fighters
are already launched and are inbound in another ten microns."
"Tell him to launch immediately," said Jani as he directed
his gaze to the flight officer.
"Gold Squadron, you are cleared for launch."
On the bridge viewers, dozens of ships launched from the
enormous bays of the WestFalen. After a dozen microns, all Vipers
had cleared the Linear and were on an intercept course with
the enemy force.
"All Vipers are clear," reported the flight officer.

"Three microns and closing," came cadet Twisty' voice
over COCCo's helmetcom.
"Just like we've practiced. Stick tight to your wingman and
take them one at a time. Right, Twisty?"
"Yes, sir," he responded. Being chided for breaking off
with his wingman before.
"Break!"
The Viper formation split up in complete synchronization.
Two groups of Vipers headed for the rear of the formation while
another four groups hit the wall of Raiders from the side.
Cocco and Cadet Twisty took the column dead on from up top
while Janos and trooper went down below. The first volley from the
Colonial warriors quickly broke up the Cylon formation and the
Raiders peeled off to counterattack. That momentarily freed the
WestFalen from danger and allowed the pilots to engage the Raiders
out in the open before they closed in on the battlestar.
Janos fired into the wall of Cylon Raiders, scoring a
direct hit. The explosion disrupted the flight paths of the two
following Raiders and caused them to divert from the rest of the
force. he followed the two fighters with her wingman close
behind.
"I've got the one on the left," said Trooper.
"The right one's mine."
Both successfully destroyed their targets and regrouped to
join the rest of the squadron.
Cocco came behind a trio of Cylon fighters. He fired his
laser torpedoes and detonated a trailing Raider. Cocco veered
off to the right to track one while twisty peeled off left. He
maneuvered into position and annihilated the Cylon with one shot.
Twisty missed the first time but got his target a micron later.
"I can't shake him," came Private StarWolf voice over the
intership comlink.
"Don't worry. I've got him." Private First Class Dillon promptly pulled the
trigger and annihilated the Raider.
"There's two heading for the surface!" shouted Jogaflame .
"Let's go get them," came back Cocco's voice as he and
Stone descended upon their enemy. The Cylon Raiders closed in on
the base below. Private First Class Softroader took out one Cylon before he could fire.
The second one began firing at the base but Dillon blew it up
before it could do any damage. The two pilots pulled up and
angled their ships' back towards the battle above.
"Protect the base," said Cocco to the rest of the
squadron. "Don't let any ship through."
and his Squad he ordered to Protect the brigade General's Ship at all cost!
The battle continued as Colonial and Cylon warriors piloted
through space in a dance of death.

"Sir," said Cadet Fossix from the crew pit. "Our pilots are
reporting high kill rates. No casualties so far."
"Good news, sir" remarked georgel.
"Yes," said Jani, thinking to himself. "Too good." A new
thought came to his mind. "Have any Raiders broken off to
approach the Westfalen?"
georgel was taken aback for a moment and then quickly replied
in the negative.
"Position of Cylon basestar?"
"Scanners still indicate the Cylon basestar is holding
position out in front of our forces."
"Are our scanners set to maximum range?"
"No, sir. They don't need to be. The basestar is within
our normal scanning radius."
"Wide scan, three hundred and sixty degree arc on all three
axes."
"One moment," replied Georgel. "We're resetting the
scanners."
Brigade General jani looked intently down at the viewer as it passed around
the Westfalen, extending its probe as far as it could as it moved
in a complete sphere.
"Wait," said Jani as he spotted something on the screen.
The image came again as a large blip slowly moved forward from
the rear of the Westfalen.
"Check the warbook on that but I'll guarantee you what it
is."
Georgel received the data on his screen a moment later.
"A basestar?"
"Are you detecting any fighters?" asked Jani to the flight
officer.
"No, sir. We're only reading one object."
"We've got to take them on before they launch their
fighters. They're probably trying to sneak up on us before they
launch their Raiders. Hard about. Bring us to light speed.
Stand by on all weapons." Jani once again turned to Georgel.
"What's our armament, Geo?"
"We exhausted our missile supply at Gomoray. But a new
shipment should have been transferred from Sidonia. We have
three missiles fully loaded at this time."
"Good, tell the crews to load the rest as soon as possible.
We may need them." Jani turned away from Geo and looked
outward into space.
"Exactly what I would have done," he said to no one in
particular. "Those devils never learn do they. The day that I
can be outsmarted by a bunch of tin cans is the day I'll resign
my commission."
Georgel stood behind him, reading into the Commander's last
statement. I was fooled, he thought. And the Commander knows
that. I failed him. Georgel kept his thoughts to himself as Jani
flexed his muscles, preparing for battle.

"Where's the Westfalen going?" The words came from the lips
of Private First Class Dillon as he damaged a Cylon Raider, sending it
careening into its neighbor and causing both to explode.
Cocco admired Jani's handiwork and then turned his gaze
towards the departing battlestar. The WestFalen was banking into a
hard turn and gaining speed as it sped off in the opposite
direction of the battle.
"That looks familiar," muttered Cocco to himself as he
remembered watching a similar scene several yahrens ago when the
Galactica withdrew from the battle that was supposed to
commemorate a new era of peace.
"Do you see what I see," chirped Twisty over the channel.
"Yeah, and I don't like it," responded Dillon.
"This is Private First Class Cocco to the Westfalen. What's going on
over there?" No response came from the ship. Cocco checked
his instruments and saw that everything was working in his Viper.
"She's not responding. It must be serious," deduced
Cocco. "This is Private First Class Cocco to all Vipers, maintain
radio silence with the Westfalen. Do not attempt to contact her."
"What's up, Cocco?"
"I don't know. But the Commander has something big planned
and I don't want to spoil it by revealing his position."
"It looks like the second wave just came in," said Softroader as
rows of Cylon Raiders descended on the Colonial pilots.
"Break off and attack. Here we go again!" Cocco piloted
his Viper in a tight turn, chasing after a pair of Raiders. He
glanced down at his fuel gauge for a moment and noticed that it
was running low.
"I sure hope Jani hurries up or we're going to be sitting
targets in another few centons."

"Twenty-five microns to target and closing," said Georgel to
Jani as he monitored the Westfalen' progress.
"Increase speed. Close the distance as fast as you can."

"By your command," said the Cylon centurion as he reported
to his commanding officer inside the command center of the
basestar.
"Report," droned Commander Tardis.
"Scanners have located the Linear Westfalen. It is moving
towards us at flank speed."
"Our plan has been detected. Attack the Westfalen. Launch
all fighters."
"By your command."

"Has she launched her fighters yet?" asked Jani.
"No, but we're detecting new signals transmitting from the
Cylons. They could be preparing to launch."
"Prepare to lock all batteries on target," said Jani as he
stared intently at the emerging shape on the viewscreen.
"Cylon basestar now within range," reported Georgel.
"Fire missiles!"
The basestar came to life firing her lasers at the
approaching battlestar. The Westfalen rocked from the barrage, but
most of the noise came from below decks as a pair of missiles
launched towards their targets.
"Missiles One and Two are away. Direct hits to their
superstructure."
The Westfalen shook some more from another barrage of lasers.
"Shield," ordered Jani to the appropriate officer. The
viewscreen closed as two panels sealed shut.
"Missiles Three and Four are ready. Cylon's launching
fighters."
"Fire!" commanded Jani. Two more missiles streaked out
towards the Cylon baseship. The first one impacted directly on
the superstructure, creating a tremendous explosion that crippled
the basestar. The second one was merely academic and finished
off the beleaguered warship as it exploded into a billion pieces.
"Cylon fighters attacking!" reported Georgel.
"Activate laser turrets. Status of missiles."
"One is now being loaded."
"Fire when ready."
The last missile launched and detonated into the rest of the
Cylon baseship. The enemy carrier exploded in a titanic
explosion, taking several dozen fighters that recently emerged
from within its bowels.
"Basestar destroyed, Commander!" exclaimed Georgel.
"How many Raiders are left."
"The gun turrets are finishing the last one off now, sir."
"Good! Negative shield. Return to our Vipers. They'll be
running out of fuel about now." Jani turned to listen to another
officer seeking his attention. After he was finished, he
returned to Georgel's side. "I want a damage report as soon as
possible, Geo. And by the way, good work. Having those
missiles in place was the key to our success."
Georgel returned to his duties, trying to relish in the pride
bestowed upon him from Jani. But no matter how much of a part he
played in their victory, he couldn't help feeling a sense of
failure at being duped by the Cylons so easily.

"Cocco," said Twisty as his engines sputtered due to lack
of fuel. "I'm out of fuel."
"Me, too," replied Trooper as her Viper shut down.
Cocco piloted his Viper behind a Cylon Raider. His
engines began to wine and he was beginning to fall behind the
enemy craft. Thumbing the trigger, he fired his lasers and
destroyed the Cylon Raider at the last moment.
"That's the last of them," said Cocco as he tried to
conserve fuel.
"Good because we're running on fumes," replied Softroader .
"Now what do we do?" asked Jogaflame.
"We wait," said Cocco. "Power down your engines and
conserve as much fuel as possible. Your going to need it to
land."
"There's the Westfalen!" hollered Calista Damanko.
"I've got nothing left," came back trooper' voice.
"Alright. Don't panic. I want those who are on fumes to
fly in first. The rest of you follow. Nothing fancy, just get
back to the landing bay. Save as much fuel as possible for your
braking thrusters."
Twisty maneuvered her ship towards alpha landing bay. he
looked down at her fuel gauge and saw that it was reading empty.
he silently prayed that there was some fuel left in his tanks
and descended towards the bay.
"twisty, fire your thrusters!" shouted Cocco over her
helmetcom. At the last moment, he said a silent prayer and
pushed down on the ignition. he was answered by a micron's
worth of burn, but that was enough to slow him down to a safe
speed. he guided his Viper down the runway and into the
emergency restraints at the far end.
The Colonial Vipers angled in towards the safety of the
Westfalen side, one by one. Cocco followed the operation to the last
individual and then landed himself after accounting for all of
his pilots.

"Sir, all Vipers have landed safely."
"Excellent piloting. I have to remember to compliment
Cocco for his training."
georgel pretended not to notice that remark and handed Jani
the damage report he had just compiled. "Moderate damage to the
hull. Compartments A27-45 are exposed to vacuum but no one was
injured. Our engines have been overstrained and are going to
need at least six centaurs worth of repair. Solium tanks are at
one-third capacity."
"Well, I suppose it could have been worse," said jani
silently as he assessed the fighting status of his ship. "Syphon
off as much fuel from the depot as you can."
"And we have a message from the surface, sir," said Georgel as
he noticed Jani's interest. "The computer techs report they have
completed their mission and are en route to the Westfalen."
"Good, have them send their report to my console. I'll be
in my quarters. You have the bridge, Private." Jani whirled
around and swiftly exited the bridge. georgel continued to stare
after him, wondering what was in that report that only Jani was
authorized to see.

to be continiued..


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Post  Coccobill on Tue Oct 18, 2011 5:09 am

wanderfull! jani, Asimov would be proud of you!!!
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the supreme master approve...
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Post  Lord'Twisty on Tue Oct 18, 2011 7:18 am

And here was me hoping Jani wouldnt remember me chasing space dust at the start there
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great story

Post  Lord~Smuky on Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:12 am

Excellent Jani u really have talent, keep on writting!
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Post  Lord'Twisty on Mon Oct 24, 2011 5:27 am

Once upon a time we chased a big spider away from one of our water mines.
Here is a picture of the strike wing doing what it loves:
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Post  Lord'Hindrik on Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:34 am

Nice picture Lord'Twisty Wink

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Post  Lord'Softroader on Tue Dec 27, 2011 8:54 am

Excellente...
I do not know you wrote. I also write ... but in French. I am unable to translate what I write ...
I write original stories and fan fiction stories... for the moment based on Stargate Background but i have a project on Battlestar Galactica which takes, a little, the BSGO theme. A Battlestar the Alcyoneus, a new generation of Battlestar returns to Caprica just before the Cylon attack and makes a PRL jump to escape... There is an PRL engine problem and can be found propel an unknown place where there are traces of an ancient war, apparently there between "humans" and "Cylons"...
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Post  Lord'Klum on Tue Dec 27, 2011 9:29 am

that's brilliant Lord Jani!
Lord Soft, I speak French fairly well. It may take me a while, but I could give translating some stories a go if you wanted me to?

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Post  Lord'Softroader on Tue Dec 27, 2011 10:18 am

Lord'Klum wrote:that's brilliant Lord Jani!
Lord Soft, I speak French fairly well. It may take me a while, but I could give translating some stories a go if you wanted me to?
My BSG story is still in reflection. I have not all keys, all the enigma. I have the ship, ships, I should say, because the Alcyoneus is particular vessel, and this may be very long ...
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Post  Lord'Draakje81 on Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:38 pm

I'm waiting for jani's story to be continued... Cool

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Post  Lord'Klum on Tue Dec 27, 2011 11:20 pm

Fair enough, I cant wait for the next part of this story either...

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Post  Lord*Jani on Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:45 am

haha well i did like it Smile im a hard nutt realy Laughing
waitig the story to continiue sub Smile

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Post  Lord~Smuky on Mon Oct 29, 2012 8:09 pm

Very good Suba, very good indeed. Keep it on .....!!!
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Post  Lord'RRVN on Mon Oct 29, 2012 10:19 pm

Waiting for next chapter! Smile
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Post  Lord'Draakje81 on Tue Oct 30, 2012 1:36 am

After waiting for almost a year now, I am happy with this positive sequel. please go on! Surprised

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Post  Guest on Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:41 am

ehhh hehehehehe Jani...... this is funny... you stole a story from somewhere else, replaced the names in the story with names from our clan (couldnt even properly write your own name with a capital J?), and posted it here, without giving credit to the original writer? and after ppl started to say "good job Jani!" you didnt say "no guys i didnt write that"??

and all the rest of you, did you really think Jani wrote that text? Very Happy
didnt you notice any difference in language? thad texd is in brober inklish, nod in Janis wannape inklish with swabbet p&b / d&t? oO

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good job to Subaruscott, at least he writes his stories himself and doesnt steal from others.

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Post  Lord'Grochu on Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:44 am

exellent i will waiting for the next chapter Very Happy
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Post  Lord*Jani on Tue Oct 30, 2012 4:50 am

yes i admit i did not write it my self. i did change some things from the orginal story line.
i wanted to greate some fun story from us in bsgo and did not think clearly that i will be judged from it.
so i addmit i did copy the story if that is what you want me to say Flint. i dont know where your attack comes from but you might have sayed this to me in Xfire and asked me to clear it up to evryone.

yes Sub is doing good job and im happy he can write good storys what we can now read.


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Post  Lord~Smuky on Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:42 pm

Excellent Suba, and...?....and...?, what happend then...?
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Post  Gummy on Tue Oct 30, 2012 10:46 pm

Very good story Sub! Looking forward to the rest!
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Post  Lord'Softroader on Wed Oct 31, 2012 1:35 am

Nice Sub...
Only one thing... no laser in BSGO....
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